ya..i liked the original feel better..the one on the right..hope when i color things will change slightly
ignore the perspective mistakes..i wanted the feel to be like that=-=;; more so the one on the right where i scribbled the whole thing..instead more carefully drawn out on paper on the left.
i cant say i put allloot of effort into this..but many hours was put..but then again that was cuz of how non productive of a mood i am feeling right now..o_o i think part of it is caused by the environment [sitting on carpet and using a tiny table to draw on tablet?] and how tired i still am...and sickness...Orz but..i guess.....if ANY suggestions imma take it on!!!
PS: ouch..i could have done that lineart much quicker..it is rough even though u cant see it..but ya..quicker and rougher lineart was what i wanted to try for this piece..o_o some new style thing...but boo i m not use to working so big..and now that i am slightly attached to this already done linear..its gonna take me a bit to dump it out by overlapping on top of it again..okey..I MMA GO SHOWER AND GET IT ALL OUT
PSS: but i am seriously burning right now..o_o i think i do have a fever not kidding.....o___o
PSSS:it is that kiriban im suppose to do along time ago btw...its of sailor Uranus and sailor Neptune..if you cant tell..which is probably the case..LOL
EDIT:!! mistakes i see already
i need to fix the structure of all the two feet in the center..the arm thats falling off sofa..eye directions